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It's so hard to talk to you.
Love and loss,
have turned us to strangers.
The victims of a love story
gone bad.
Why, just the other day
we passed in the halls.
You didn't even look at me.
Do you remember,
how close we once were?
Now i'm chancing glances,
wanting to know if you're watching too.
I remember the days
we were always together.
Peas in a pod.
Birds of a feather.
But now everythings changed.
You're different from before.
I think I am too.
But that doesn't mean,
that i don't miss you.
©2007-2010 ~forevercrying
:iconforevercrying:

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i don't really know what to say about this one...

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:iconombroparanojo:
really nice, full of emotion. i'm sure they miss you sometimes too. :hug:

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If I could
I would make the world silver
Just for you

<3<3<3
:iconforevercrying:
thank you. :hug: i'm not sure if tha'd be a good thing or not though.

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i wanna love you...
:iconkayarlynnean:
I feel the same way about a friendship that has recently faded. I hope things get better. But on the bright side... the poem was AWESOME!
:iconpoeticpanther:
I've totally felt that way........ shoot. And he got a new girlfriend too but wants to be my best friend every other week. So he only ignores and disses me the other every other week.

Great poem! :+fav:

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Do you ever just want to scream at someone, "MAKE UP YOUR MIND ALREADY!!!!!! Do you want to be my friend or not!?"
:iconforevercrying:
oh i'm sorry. i kno what that's like. just don't let him get to you. :hug:
thanks for the fav! =)

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i wanna love you...
:iconforevercrying:
thanks! i'm sorry that happened to you, and i hope things get better for you aswell.

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i wanna love you...
:iconpoeticpanther:
your welcome ^)^

And thank you! :hug:

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Do you ever just want to scream at someone, "MAKE UP YOUR MIND ALREADY!!!!!! Do you want to be my friend or not!?"
:iconkayarlynnean:
it's okay... it was on the brink of breaking already. thanks. and you're welcome
:iconfalseapologies:
yeah.. people change..and love is lost *shakes head* even if both people know it wasnt meant to go like this.
my favourite part would be:
"Why, just the other day
we passed in the halls.
You didn't even look at me."
i LOVE this poem. though it really hit a soft spot but tis all good. shit happens ~
:heart:

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KAM.

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